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XDTiistai 09.12.2008 19:20

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Max Myers and The Dino Dino Land Chapter..4


Well.. I was surprised when i got so good comments from few people not lazy enough to comment my stories, but there was that you suck at grammar and you should check them... Well i´m sorry if they suck and i have tried to look threw them but what can i do because English isn't my native language and i am too lazy to get them proof read´ed by someone.. Soooo.. No more grammar sucks comments PLEASE.. now on the story we go... XD


When next morning came Max woke up to the sound of people running out side of his room, so whit a groan he tried to get up, but noticed that Rei was still laying on his chest. So he did a quick kawarimi and chanced places whit the pillow on the floor.

"Oh great." The human said when he noticed that he was naked and then he remembered the last night whit the raptor so he glanced at her sleeping figure before sighing and starting to dress his clothes on. When he was dressed he created a kage bunshin to go find out what was going on outside while he himself started to do his morning exercises, push ups, pull ups, one finger push ups and the tip of the kunai push ups. Where you smash a kunai in the ground handle first so that the sharp point is pointing upward then you start doing one fingered push ups on the tip of the kunai while keeping your body straight so that your legs were in the air.

This exercise rise´d you chakra and its control. Max had been doing this until he felt some one watching him and saw Rei lying on the bed while looking at him curiously,

"Good morning." Max said finishing his exercise and returning his kunai in his pouch.

"What were you doing." She asked while the human made few stretches,

"I was training, it keeps me in shape and because of my training i was able to do all those things you saw me do before." Max said sitting on the bed while starting to rub Rei´s head making her murr. Suddenly Max got the memories of his clones when it dispelled it´s self, it seemed that there was other survivors back at the hotel and they were planning to go and rescue them.

"We have to go Rei." Max said standing up while the raptor stood up and followed him, they went in the room where Max felt Sean and Clark to be.

"We have to go save them, we just cant leave them there to die." Clark said making Sean nod while others just growled,

"We aren't going to go there to get ourself killed, i say we head at the boat." Said random furry which made Clark to glare at him and Max decided to reveal his presence so he stepped out from the shadows.

"You guys go to the dock while I and Rei go back to save those others at the hotel." Max said making everyone to turn their head at him and the raptor walking next to the human.

"Max you are awake." Sean said surprised which made Max to groan,

"Well good morning to you too, so do we got a deal. You guys head to the dock while we go back at the hotel." Max said gesturing Rei next to him while Clark just nodded,

"Okay, here is radio so that we can keep in touch." Clark said handing Max a radio phone while the human just nodded and turned to leave, only to be stopped by a paw on his shoulder.

"Be careful out there Max." Sean said making the human smirk,

"Well i could say same thing to you too." Max said walking out from the room whit Rei. When they got outside max turned to look at the raptor next to him,

"So are you up to small race." He asked making the raptor smirk,

"Your funeral." She answered before dashing in the forest while Max ran after her. They had ran for hour until Max grasped Rei and leaped behind a near by tree, making the raptor look at him surprised until the human pointed at the small clearing in front of them. There was about dozen of those red scaled raptors feasting on a big corpse of dinosaur

"We have to go around them." Max whispered releasing her and they moved slowly so that they could get around them whiteout them noticing their presence. When they were clear they started to run again while Max kept the lead so that he could see if there was anything dangerous in front of them.

It took about two hours from them until they got back at the hotel, Rei seemed to be exhausted so Max told her to stay in here whit his two recently created kage bunshins while the human himself went in the hotel to look for survivors. He was moving slowly on the hallways when he heard a scream so he started to run until he arrived to the hall where three furries were trying to defend them self whit metal pipes against tree red scaled raptors.

They were losing badly so Max had to move fast, so he boosted his speed whit his chakra and ran at the closest raptor and leaped. The human landed on the neck of the raptor smashing its head on the ground whit sickening crunch, then he noticed other two of the raptors look at him so he took out a kunai and tossed it between the eyes of the one raptor making it fall limp on the ground, the last raptor noticed that it didn't stand a chance against this new threat so it ran away, but when Max saw where it was running he knew that it couldn't get far so he turned to look at the three furries. One of them seemed to be injured from its leg while the others had slight scratches on their body.

"Are you okay." Max asked while the furries looked surprised,

"Look I´m here to help, there is other survivors and they are heading at the other side of this island because there is a boat which we can use to escape." The human said rising his arms in the air,

"Can you tell me how a human got in this island." asked a canine anthro making Max to sigh,

"I came whit my friend Sean to see Clark." The human said making the fur's surprised,

"Clark is alive." They chorused making the human cringe at the level of their sound.

"Okay... Let´s just go i want out of this shit hole ASAP." Max said starting to walk out side while the three furries followed him while carrying the wounded one. When they arrived outside the furries gasped when they saw Rei standing there, but Max just grinned when she walked at him and nudged at his hand which made the human pat her hand.

"Don't worry she is my friend, i once had a t-Rex but he didn't get along my dog and ate it so i had sell it to a local pet store." Max said smirking at the furries shocked expressions,

"You know i was just kidding about the t-Rex." Max said after he had watched their shocked expression for few minutes and when he said the magic words it made the furries glare at him.

"Well lets move along now, we don't want any big and hungry after us." Max said starting to walk whit Rei next to him while the three furries walked behind him. He had left few of his kage bunshins to follow them behind and kill any dinosaur who where threat to them.
When they had walked about an hour Max heard his radio phone peep,

"Yo." The human said pressing the button,

"Max did you find them." Sean asked,

"Well...." Max said looking over his shoulder at the furries following him, "They are hanging around." He finished turning to look back at their path.

"Its not time for jokes Max, we are in trouble." Sean said and Max could hear some gun fire from the radio,

"Well you started the party whit out me, what a shame." Max said sighing,

"God damned Max there is a big ass lizard after us." Sean yelled before the radio went mute making the human stop and look back at the three furries. While Rei stood next to him looking worried,

"Well guys I´m sorry to say that others got in trouble so we have to move fast." Max said creating three more kage bushins,

"Now i want no questions just climb on the back of my clones because i can move faster carrying you than we run at your speed." Max said and the three furries climbed on the clones while Max gestured for Rei to climb on his back.

When they were ready Max and his clones started to run so fast that the forest looked like a blur,

"Thissss isss awesssome." Rei whispered from Max back which made him grin while he headed at the direction where he could feel Sean's chakra.

When they neared the place where the human could feel others to be, he gestured for his clones to wait while he cleared the path. When the human landed on the clearing he saw two t-Rex´s circling around the furries, which made him frown and start running at the closest one. The big lizard didn't notice him which was a big mistake because Max started to run along the tail tail of the t-Rex while using his chakra to keep his feet on the scales of the lizard. When the lizard noticed that something was on his back and it turned it´s head to look it was too late, the human had a grip of the handle of his katana and the was a cutting sound before Max landed on the ground kneeling while holding his blade on his right hand, he had left Rei whit his clones so that he was able to better and now they could see the eyes of the t-Rex go wide before half of its face spurted a large spurt of blood and fell on the ground whit the body coming after wards making the ground tremble.

Suddenly the human shot at the last t-Rex while starting to spin in the air making a white gleaming typhoon surround him which went threw the last t-Rex shredding it into little pieces. The human landed on the ground kneeling again and panting lightly, because the move had taken quite lot out of him and he had been running whit chakra whole day so it didn't help either.

Whit a quiet chuckle Max returned his katana in its sheath and stood up walking at the gaping furries while his clones and Rei walked out from the forest. The clones laid the three furries down before disappearing in puff of smoke while Rei walked next to Max chirping at him worriedly while nudging at his side.

"I´m okay Rei." Max said rubbing her muzzle which made her murr,

"That was awesome Max how were you able to do that." Sean asked suddenly which made the human sigh,

"Lots of training, now lets move and find a place to camp. Because the place we are heading is at least a day away at your speed." Max said starting to walk while Rei walked next to him,

"Cant you make clones and carry us or something." Asked a random furry which made the human groan,

"Look i have my limits okay and now i´m too exhausted to do even one clone." Max said and glared at the others so that they wont ask anymore questions, so after that they continued walk for an hour until they got in another small clearing and they camped in there for night. The group decided to keep three at time on watch while others slept so that they didn't get any surprises, after they had gotten a campfire on they started to cook their food they got from the lab. Max and Rei were eating next to each others while keeping a small distance from the others so that they could talk.

"How are you able to do thossse thingsss." The raptores asked after they had eaten and were laying on the ground, Max on his back while she laid her head on his chest.

"I have been training my whole life and recently i noticed that i could use this chakra which helps me a lot." Max answered while rubbing her head making the raptor murr,

"You are ssstrange." Rei whispered which made the human chuckle and after that they fell in sleep.


Soooooo.. Got more action and some cuddling.. o_O Well i don't have much to say than REWIEV.. Oh and i get a tattoo tomorrow wohoo... Soooo.. See ya next time.. XD
Max Myers and The Dino Dino Land Chapter..3


Well well what we got in here... A second yiff chapter.. WOW.. I bet you are just getting horny to read so lets go on whit the story.. XD


Max woke up next morning when he felt something breathing on his neck, so whit a groan he opened his eyes and noticed that the raptor had slept next to him whole night, which made him sigh. He stood up slowly and saw his kage bunshin laying against the wall before dispelling it self making its memory to transfer in the original and Max noticed that the night had been pretty boring.

Whit out further word the human opened the window in the bedroom, only for the light from outside to shine straight on Sean's eyes making the silver furred fox groan,

"Wake up sunshine." Max said ripping the blankets off from Sean making the fox grumble, before standing up and stretching, making his joints pop. Which caused the raptor to stir awake,

"Well good morning Rei, are you hungry." Max said petting the head of the raptor making it purr,

"You named her, good god Max. You have strange taste for pets, what´s next a t-rex." Sean said which made the human grin.

"That would be so cool." Max said clapping his hands together and you could see stars blinking in his eyes, which made Rei and Sean to sweat drop.

"Well anyway, we should go to the kitchen and grab something to eat before we leave." Max said picking up his back bag and turning to look at the raptor, "Can you walk Rei." Max asked making the raptor chirp and jump from the bed next to Max and nuzzle his side.

"Well lets go then I´m hungry." Sean said and they started to head at the kitchen, which Max knew where it was because he clones had gotten them some food from there yesterday. When they got there Max cooked them some breakfast, while Rei looked curiously at the human when he was roasting the piece of meet on the frying pan.

"Rei i cant eat meat whit out cooking it before, it wont do good for my stomach and besides it tastes lot more better." Max said grinning and gave a small piece for the raptor who sniffed it curiously before taking it from his hand, biting it few times before swallowing. Then she started to chirp and jump around Max making the human laugh while Sean just groaned mumbling about Max and his strange pets.

After the break fast they went outside only to notice that the road leading at the lab was over grown by the forest so they had move on foot.

"Great just fucking great." Sean said getting frustrated when they walked in the forest Max walking next to Sean while Rei walked next to human only to stop and smell flowers and chase some little rodents, while chirping loudly, making Max to smile.

"Are you even listening Max." Sean asked and the human turned to look at the fox,

"Hmm.. Sorry did you say something." Max asked making the fox fall flat on his face on the ground,

"God damned Max you will get us killed if you faze out like." Sean yelled making Rei to stop and quirk her head to the side while Max just sighed.

"Sean you are the one who will attract the predators at us. So shut up." Max said glaring at the fox who just grumbled and they continued their trip. While they were walking Rei suddenly freeze up and started to sniff the air,

"Rei what is it." Max asked flaring his senses but couldn't sense anything which made him more curious, until Rei ran in the forest. "Rei." Max said creating kage bunshin only to leave it whit Sean while running after the raptor by himself. He was pouncing from tree branch to tree branch while following her, few minutes later she stopped when they arrived in a small clearing and Max landed next to Rei.

The sight in front of them was pretty gruel, blue scaled black striped raptors bodies lying dead on the ground, either torn in the pieces or stomped to the death. Then the human noticed their nest´s, they were broken and the eggs were gone, this sight made Rei to chirp sadly while trying to nudge a body of the raptor awake but it was in wain, her pack was dead and she was only one alive. Max walked and knelled next Rei throwing his arms around her neck and laying the raptors head on his shoulder while rubbing her back.

"I´m sorry that this happened to your pack, but the world is gruel in this place, only the strongest will survive." Max said while Rei was nuzzling on his neck, it felt like hours they just sat there until Max felt the raptors steady breathing at his neck and he turned to look at her only to see that she had fallen in sleep. So he picked her up bridal style and started to run back at Sean.

When he arrived at the place where he left Sean he noticed that he was looking pretty angry, so the human chuckled nervously.

"Sorry about that now lets move on." Max said giving the raptor to the clone to carry and then they started to walk again,

"What was there anyway." Sean asked which made the human sigh and glance at Rei,

"Someone had killed her pack and the nests were destroyed." Max said frowning which made the fox sigh and bow his head a little. Next few hours of their trip was walked quietly while Max kept his senses open for any possible attacks. Suddenly they heard a sound of gun fire coming from the direction of the lab, which made them to start run at the direction. When they arrived Max pulled Sean in the pushes nearby while his clone knelled next to them still holding sleeping Rei in its arms.

"What the hell Max we have to help them." Sean said when they saw several furries firing at the red scaled raptor they saw when they first got here,

"No, you stay here whit Rei and my clone, while i go there." Max said

"But.." Sean tried to protest but he was shut up by Max who glared at him,

"Thats an order, not a reguest." Max said disappearing in a blur, only to appear at the nearest red scaled raptor and be-head it whit his katana before leaping and kicking the nearest raptor in the head making it snap back whit a loud pop. He saw a surprised faces of the furries when he threw a kunai in the head of another raptor while starting to run at the others raptors who were still figuring out what happened, when Max got near two raptors he leaped and gave a kick at their heads whit both of his legs making the lizard fly and slam in the tree, when the human noticed last of the two raptors trying to run away, he took out two kunais in one hand and threw them in the necks of the raptors killing them instantly.

After he had finished last of the raptors he heard the furries cheer behind him, so he turned to look at them while returning his katana in its sheath on his back. The human noticed a white furred feline anthro walking at him, the feline wear´ed a tattered battle suit while holding a machine gun in its paws,

"You must be the human i have heard the news talking about." Said the feline in male voice,

"And might your name be Clark." Max asked while crossing his arms over his chest, which made the feline rise his eyebrow.

"Well, yes i am." He answered and then Max gestured at the bushes behind him only for Sean and his clone carrying Rei to stand up and start to walk up at them. Only for the furries raise their weapons when they saw the raptor and the clone of Max, which made the real Max step between them.

"This fox here is Sean and the other me is just a clone and the raptor is.. well.. kind of pet of mine.. Shes been hanging around since i saved her." Max said when Sean and his clone stopped next to him. Only for Rei to wake up whit a chirp and look around questionably before Max´s clone laid her on the ground and dispelled its self. While the real one walked next to the raptor,

"It´s okay Rei they are friends." Max said patting her on the head making the raptorr murr and nuzzle at his hand.

"Amazing.. You were able to befriend a raptor." Clark said gesturing for others to lay down their weapons,

"What happened in here Clark." Sean asked making the feline to look at him and sigh.

"Lets go inside." Clark said and they moved in the lab while few furries stayed on guard, the feline told Max and Sean how they have resurrected dinosaurs from a simple dna in a stone of some sort, then almost right after Clark had called Sean to come there the dinosaurs escaped killing almost every one and they have been stuck on the island for a month. After the felines little story Max said that they had to get out from the island which made Clark to sigh and say that there was a boat large enough for them at the other side of the island, but the road to there is threw the most dangerous areas.

Max only answer was to create 50 kage bunshins and say that he had an army of his own so they don't need to worry about, which made other furries who didn't know his skills to gape at him. After their little talk Max had been given some food and he went in the room where he and Rei were staying.

When he opened the door of his room he saw Rei laying on the bed curled up while sleeping lightly, so he laid the tray where the food was on the table and sat on the bed starting to pet her on the head making the raptor murr and open her eye lids.

"Hey i bought some food." Max said taking some meat from the tray and giving it to the raptor who chirped and started to eat while the human just smiled and started to eat his food. When he was finished he laid next to the Rei on the bed only for the raptor to look at him,

"What are you looking." Max asked and suddenly his lips were met whit the muzzle of the raptor and they shared a long kiss. When they broke off the blue scaled raptor surprised him big time,

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"Max thank you for ssssaving me then." She said hissing and before Max could say anything he was locked in another kiss whit the raptor. She started to use her small hands to take off the humans clothes, when Max was naked Rei started to lick his chest going lower and lower until she was nuzzling at his crotch making the human moan in pleasure. She gave few lick before taking the hard member of the human in her muzzle and wrap her tongue around it, making Max to gasp in surprise for sudent warmth around his cock. The the raptoress started to move her head up and down slowly while avoiding the her teeth, this lasted for few minutes until Max told her to stop which made her to look at the smirking human.

Before she could say anything Max had turned around so that she was laying on the bed on her back and then the human kissed her on her muzzle making the raptoress murr softly, when he broke the kiss he started to move downs ward while kissing her on his way down. When he got between her legs he saw her slit swollen and dripping its juices making his erection to throb painfully, he started to slowly lick her juices making Rei to murr and chirp loudly when Max pushed his tongue inside of her making the raptor jerk her hips upwards.

"You like it huh." Max said grinning after he had positioned himself on top of her so that his cock was near her entrance, only for the Rei to murr and push the human inside of her whit her legs. This sudden action made Max to moan and start thrusting in her slowly to make it more pleasurable. When Max felt that he was coming closer to his peak he pulled out and kissed her before impaling himself fully in her making the raptor chirp loudly and Max could feel her juices flowing along his shaft while he himself held his peak because he had something else in mind.

So whit a grin he pulled out from the raptoress making her yelp when he turned her around so that the red lizard was laying on all fours on the bed, making the human climb on her back and plunge his cock in her suddenly making her chirp loudly and then he started to thrust fast and hard making Rei to murr while the human moaned. This lasted only for a while because Max felt that he was close to cum so he bit on the lizards shoulder making her chirp in surprise before he pulled back and slammed hard in her only for them both to scream in climax.

After that they fell on the bed, Rei nuzzling on the humans chest while he was still inside of her, filling her womb whit his cum.

"So you can talk." Max asked making the raptor murr happily, while nuzzling at the humans neck.

"Yes and i think i like you." Rei answered which made Max to smile and rub the side of her muzzle before giving her a kiss,

"I think i like you too." Max said and after that they cuddled up and fell in sleep.



Well did you like it HUH?? HUH?? Please REWIEV...

??????????????????????????????????Lauantai 06.12.2008 12:45

KUINKA MONI LUKEE MINUN TARINOITA JOITA OLEN KIRJOITTANUT PÄIVÄKIRJAANI.. OLISI VAIN AIKA JÄNNÄ TIETÄÄ.. XD
Max Myers and The Dino Dino Land Chapter..2


Well how did you like the first chapter of the second season of Max Myers... This is probably going to be interesting.. Because Max meets a scaly girl and dangerous one to boost... Well i ran out of the words to say so lets move on whit the story..


When the next morning came, Max was already awake while cooking another one of the dinosaurs which the clones had killed last night because it was too close of their camping site. When Sean woke up, the first thing he saw was his human companion sitting near the camp fire and cooking some meat, which made his stomach grumble and Max to chuckle.

"Want some." Max said after the fox had stretched his limps and sat near him,

"Yeah." Sean answered while taking the piece of meat Max offered after that they ate few minutes in silence.

"We are leaving soon get ready." Max said after he had finished his meat and put out the fire so that it wont burn the whole forest down, after their meal they started to walk again. They had arrived few hours later at a grass field which made Sean to gasp when they saw all the big house sized dinosaurs there eating crass and stuff.

"Well it seems Clark had been busy." Max said while flaring his chakra senses so that he could sense if there was any people near by, but only thing he sensed were dinosaurs.

"I cant believe that he was able to resurrect them." Sean said while taking some pictures whit his digital camera which he had picked up from his pocket, but suddenly they heard a roar in the nearby and there was a screech after it.

"What was that." Sean asked trembling while Max was holding the hilt of his katana, he had taken it out from the capsule when he had woken up this morning and it was now resting on his back,

"I don't know but i´m going to find out." Max said and started to run at the location of those voices,

"Hey... Wait up:" Sean yelled running after the human. Few minutes later Max arrived at the edge of small clearing where a dozen blue scaled whit black stripe´s raptors where fighting against a tyrannosaurus Rex whit a bad result. There were three bodies and when fourth one fell on the ground the rest of the raptors ran away, leaving the one who had felled on the ground chirping at the others to help it, but it was in wain because the t-rex closed at it and when Max saw the blue eyes of the fallen raptor he could see fear and intelligent in them.

"Max." Sean whispered next to the human when he had seen the frown on his face, only for Max to growl and crouch low before flaring his chakra and disappearing in thin air. Only to appear near the t-rex head and give a mighty spin kick at the side of the lizards muzzle making it fall on the nearest tree braking it because of its weight, after that Max landed in front of the downed raptor and looked at it.

He saw a relief, fear and surprise in its eyes before its eye fluttered and then closed. The raptor had passed out,

"Max watch out." Sean yelled suddenly and the human took a grip from the handle of his katana and then there was a flash of light and sound of sword returning in its sheath. Then the newly risen t-rex who was standing behind the human stopped and suddenly there was a spurt of blood around the lizards neck before its head fell on the ground while its body felled backwards shaking the ground because of it´s weight.

Sean was gaping like a fish when he saw Max taking out to biggest of the beasts whit his sword, only for the human to kneel next to the raptor and starting to treat its wounds, cleaning, stitching and bandaging them.

"Why did you save it." Sean asked walking at the human while dodging the other dead raptors on his path,

"Its not it, its she." Max said while tying the last bandages on the raptors wound and after that he picked her up carefully.

"But its only a beast and its gonna eat us when it wakes up." Sean said almost yelling but stopped when Max glared at him releasing some killer intent which made the fox shudder,

"SHE was scared, can mindless beast´s be scared." Max asked and Sean lowered his head, "I didn't think so and besides she wouldn't be able to move because of her wounds." Max said continuing his walk while the fox followed. Max had greated few clones to carry the raptor while he kept watch, they had been walking for another hour and the raptor was still unconscious.

"Argh.. How big is this island.. We have been walking for many hours and seen nothing but trees and look.... More trees." Sean yelled getting frustrated only for Max to sigh and point at the side of the road where a abandon´ed pick up truck was laying,

"Will that make you to shut up." Max asked only for the fox to ran at it and yank the door open and start to search for something.

"FUCK.. there is no phone in here." Sean said getting frustrated while Max examined the truck, it was in good shape if you dint count the blood marks on the seats and the claw marks on the doors. There was also a 9mm hand gun in the glove locket, so he gave it to the Sean.

"Can you use this." Max asked showing the handgun and two clips at the hands of the fox,

"Yeah i think so." Sean said reloading the gun and putting it between his back and pants while the another clip went in his pocket, he had gotten a fire arm lessons when he was working on Mr. Brian's.

"Well then i think we should use this truck to move faster." Max said walking in front of the truck and started to push it back on the road while using his chakra to boost his strength,

"Cant you teleport us there somehow." Sean asked when the truck was on the road again and the human turned to look at him while his clones climbed in the back taking the raptor whit them.

"I cant do sunshin yet and if i could i would need to see where the place i teleport is." Max said climbing on the driver seat in the truck while Sean sat next to him. After Max had started and turned the truck around they started to drive along the road. They had been driving only for few hours when they saw a large building in front of them, it was like a mall of some sort and there was a big sing on top of the main door. "Dino Dino Land." read on it which made Max to groan while stopping the truck near the door and they all stepped out from it.

"It seems that the place is deserted." Sean said while looking around,

"No shit Sherlock." Max said trying to open the front door but it was locked tight, "Lets see if there is any other way in, i wouldn't want to brake the door because then the dinos have one more way to get inside if we want to stay a night in here." Max said starting to walk while his clones carrying the raptor followed him.

"Hey, do you think that Clark might be in here." Sean asked walking next the human, who waved his head.

"I cant sense anything in this building so he is not in here." Max said before stopping in front of another door and they noticed that it was open. So Max took a kunai in his right hand while opening the door whit his left one, they arrived in a small hallway so they started to walk along it. They had found many different room, kitchens, storage room, bedrooms, it was like the place was some sort of hotel so they decided to stay in there for night.

They were sitting in a big bedroom, there was three beds, a bathroom and few minor furnitures. Max´s clones had laid the raptor on one of the beds and after that they went to find some food from the kitchens while Max and Sean stayed in the room. Sean was just about to ask that when the raptor would probably wake up but he was interrupted by a whimper coming from the bed where the raptor laid, making Max to walk between Sean and the raptor.

When the raptor opened her eyes first thing she saw was Max standing in front of her smiling, which made her growl and trying to trash at the human whit her legs but Max just moved a side and took a hold of the raptors muzzle turning her to look at his face.

"Calm down. I´m not gonna hurt you, you are in the hotel where i brought you after saving you from the t-rex." Max said slowly while rubbing the side of the raptor´s muzzle whit his other hand, making it relax and murr softly.

"Oh shit i thought we were gonna die." Sean said while holding the hand gun in his paws which were trembling, while Max just chuckled.

"She´s not gonna kill us. She is more like a big puppy, see." Max said when the raptor licked his face, making Sean to snort and return his hand gun on his back.

"Yeah like a big puppy whit razor sharp claws." Sean said, few minutes later Max´s clones came back carrying food for Max and Sean while the other one was carrying a red meat fro the raptor, before the clone could do anything the raptor had leaped from the bed on the clone dispelling it while starting to eat the stake in vigor, which made others to sweat drop.

"She sure is hungry." Max said after his other clone had disappeared in puff of smoke, after the raptor had eaten her meat she went and laid next to the Max curling around him and laying her head on his lap which made the human rise his eyebrow while Sean just smirked.

"She sure likes you a lot." Sean said earning a glare from the human while he rubbed the head of the raptor. After their meal Sean and Max had studied the map one of the clones had brought while the raptor slept on Max´s lap, they had came to the conclusion that they would go see the lab tomorrow because that would be the first place where they thought Clark would be.

After their planning Sean went to sleep while Max created three kage bunshins to make some traps outside and keep a guard at night while he himself laid on laid on the bed the raptor curled on his lap, she was probably still tired from the wounds, Max thought whit a sigh and continued to rub her head while thinking that could he bring her at his place, because the government might take her away to make some experiments, but they can try. Because Max wasn't going to give up anything whit out a fight so whit a smile on his face he went to sleep.


Sooo... Did you like it o_O more yiffy chappies in future just stay tuned on Max Myers and The Dino Dino Land... AND PLLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEE REWIEV... So that i can laugh at you comments.. XD
Max Myers and The Dino Dino Land Chapter..1


Sorry that i haven't written in few days, because i have been busy in work and dying my hair. So now we will move in new part of the story series, Max Myers and Dino Dino land, have fun in middle of dangerous dinosaurs... XD


When the next morning came Max woke up next to something warm and furry, he would have freaked out if he didn't have a big headache from the all drinking last night so whit a groan he stood up and walked slowly because he felt that his ass was torn in pieces. When he got in the bathroom he laid against the sink ans started to use his chakra to burn the last of the alcohol from his body making the horrible hangover fade a way like it was never there.

But this off course caused him to think clearly and he remembered what happened last night so he ran and puked in the toiled. He had sex whit a furry and male one to speak, which he didn't like at all. But it actually had felt good so if Nexus wouldn't remember what happened last night then he would just forget it. So after few minutes off freshening up the human went and picked up his clothes, dressed them on and leaved to go home.

Later that day max had been at the GR room whole day training and trying to burn off his frustration. His ten kage bunshin´s were surrounding him and almost suddenly everyone of them leaped at Max and the ultimate taijutsu battle engaged. This lasted about an hour more before he was interrupted by a door bell ringing. Which made him grumble, while he wrapped a towel around his neck and went to open the door.

"Hey Max." Said the silver furred fox anthro behind the door, making the human quirk his eyebrow.

"Hi Sean, what brings you here." Max asked opening the door wider so that the fox could get in and after that they went in Max´s room where he offered a drink for Sean.

"I was thinking that would you like to go on trip, because my friend called me that he wanted to show me something and i thought you would be interested." Sean said smirking and the fox knew he had caught the humans interest,

"What kind of trip we are talking about." Max asked thinking that it would be another Mr. Brian case, but it wasn't when Sean started to tell that his friend was researching dinosaurs and he had made a huge discovery. This off course made Max very interested because he had a hunch that they had made something very interesting. So whiteout further a do Max agreed and their trip would start at next weekend and Sean would be coming to pick him up then.

The next week had went pretty normally. Nexus had called him and asked that what happened that night and Max just said that he had passed out on his couch when he had guided him in his room and Nexus just grunted telling him about the abnormal booze head, what ever it was. The next day Rose had came to see him and told that she had broken up whit his boyfriend so Max had to play Dr. Phil for the rest of the day. Then came the thing which was the reason Max had locked him self in his house and called in sick.

It seemed that the furries got in heat once in a month and Max had went to see Mike but he had found him bouncing on Jean so he had turned around and went in his house and barricaded the door. Lucky for the human he didn't have any heat problems so he had no problem to train the rest of the time. He was already using a 20 times of earth gravity which made him almost as fast and strong as the superman, but he hadn't growth in chakra very much.

When the Friday came Sean had laughed at Max when he had seen the barricade made by Max for his own safety, but when the human told about seeing Mike doing his thing whit Jean and added the heat thing, Sean had almost choked on his laugh which made Max to punch the ground near the fox´s head making a large crater on it which made Sean to sweat drop.

After that little incident they left to the dock to get a boat at the island where this friend of Sean worked, when Max had heard that they were going on another island he had started to mutter about explosion and dragons on steroids which made others on the boat sweat drop. The trip to the island took a day and when they got at the dock the boat left Sean and Max to stand at there to wait their pick up.

"So when are they suppose to come." Max asked while laying against a light post, they had been there for four hours waiting but they haven't seen any others fur´s in here like the place was deserted.

"I don't know, he was supposed to be here when we came." Sean said trying to call at his friend but he couldn't get connection and it made the silver furred fox nervous,

"Well it´s no use to stay here." Max said taking his back bag and starting to walk along the road,

"Hey wait." Sean said tunning after the human. They had been walking about an hour and they didn't see any living being on their trip, which made Sean nervous while Max stayed alert for anything and rested his hand on his pouch where his newly acquired kunai´s were.

"Where is everybody, i would think that there is at least few people in here but the place looks deserted." Sean said while they walked on the road,

"We are followed." Max whispered suddenly standing next to the fox and laying his hand on his shoulder, but suddenly fife red figures leaped from around them tearing their sharp claws on the back of the the two travelers, only for them to turn in smoke which revealed two shredded wooden logs.

"Wha.." Sean said when he noticed that they were standing high in the tree top before Max covered his mouth whit his hand and held a finger in front of his lips and then pointed at the clearing where fife red scaled lizards were sniffing at the logs.

Max had used kawarimi and replaced Sean and him whit wooden logs from the tree where they were hiding when he fad felt the lizards moving fast at them.

"Those are raptors." Sean whispered surprised, while the human just nodded while looking the fife red scaled black stripped raptors below them chirping each others while trying to find them but they were below the wind so they couldn't smell them.

"It seems that our trip turned much more interesting." Max said smirking when the raptors left, which made Sean to sweat drop.

"You call this interesting, those are fucking raptors. If you didn't have those freaky skills we would be dead." Sean said almost yelling at Max, who just shrugged.

"So what you think we should do now." Max asked looking at Sean who looked at his phone which had ran out of battery,

"I don't know, i think that Clark would knew some answers about whats going on in here." Sean said,

"Is this Clark the friend who called you here." Max asked while laying against the tree trunk,

"Yeah." The silver furred fox answered.

"Well then we should go and find him." Max said taking a hold from the fox and leaping down from the tree making Sean gasp in surprise when they landed on the road.

"Don't do that." Sean said growling at Max who just smirked at him,

"Do what." The human asked starting to walk again along the road while Sean followed him.

"Crapping me and jumping down from very high trees whiteout even asking." Sean said growling which made Max to grin even more,

"Well you could always ask ride from those raptors back there." Max said pointing behind him making the fox anthro groan.

"You are making lame jokes while we are in middle of the dangerous dinosaurs." Sean said almost yelling at the human.
They had been walking for another hour when there was a sign at the side of the road, both travelers stopped to look at the sign and anyone could see a sweat drop growing on the back of their head.

"Dino dino land, what the hell." Sean said suddenly making Max cringe at the sound,

"Seriously Sean do you have to call any dino´s in here whit that sound of yours." Max said trying to sense if there was anything near but couldn't sense anything so he sighed in relief.

"Well do you have anything to eat, I´m hungry." Sean said making Max to swat his own face at the palm of his hand, suddenly there was two puffs of white smoke and when it disappeared there was three Max´s standing in front of Sean, but before the fox could say anything two of the Max´s started to run in the woods.

"What the hell was that for." Sean asked while Max started to collect dry stick and rocks so that he could make a camp site,

"They are my clones and they went to hunt some food." Max answered while making a ring from the rocks and then set the sticks in middle of them.

"Don't you have any food in those capsules of your." Sean asked after he had sat on the ground near the fire Max said made whit the lighter from his,

"Yes, i have some dry food but i wouldn't miss a chance for roasted dinosaur meat." Max said smirking at Sean who just sighed.

"How can you be so calm in middle of this place." Sean asked gesturing around, which made the human just shrug his shoulders.

"Well when you got IQ over 200 and you are almost as strong as superman you tend to get little weird." Max said adding some wood in the fire, they sat there in silent while watching the fire, when suddenly the two of Max´s clones dropped from the tree next to the original and dropped a dog sized green lizard in front of them before disappearing in puff of smoke. The lizard was already skinned so Max didn't have to do anything else that to cook them in the fire,

"I think we should camp here to night, because it´s getting dark and we probably cant see a shit in the dark." Max said making Sean to glare at him,

"But what about those that hunt in night." Sean asked which made Max to grin.

"I´ll set some traps and leave few clones to watch. Besides i can probably kick everyones ass in here so you don't need to worry." Max said making clones and sending them to make traps and after that they took positions in the trees, while Max and Sean laid against the tree trunks near the camp fire which was kept on fire by one of the clones.

"So do you think that Clark is alive." Sean asked while they laid against the trees,

"Maybe. If his will to live is strong enough." Max said closing his eyes while resting his hand near his pouch so that he would be ready if someone attacked.

"Well this will be a good tale to tell friends. I camped in middle of island full of dinosaurs." Sean said which made Max to snort,

"Get some sleep we are waking early tomorrow." Was the last word said that night before they both started to sleep.


So what do you think... Maybe i took the idea from somewhere else but i don't care.. It just had been bugging in my head so i had to drop it somewhere.. Well then.. Until next time ill make some more chappies because its weekend and i probably don't have anything else to do... Sooo see ya and please REWIEV..

Max Myers and his TFS-109 Chapter..10Tiistai 02.12.2008 23:25

Max Myers and his TFS-109 Chapter..10


Well well.. At least few people ain't lazy enough to comment so thanks for the comments.. Now there is gonna be some bed time action in this series too, but you just have to be patient..


When Max had gotten back home Mike was first to start asking questions that how did he get back so soon and what was the news in the tv about island which exploded from the map which Max just simply answered shrugging before saying, "Don´t know, don´t care." The human said walking in his house to take a shower while thinking about Sean, he was good pal so he hoped that he had gotten out somehow before the explosion. After the shower, Max was going to see what he got from the Mr. Brian´s mansion, when he had just finished his shower there was a knock on the door, which made Max surprised, who would come at his place he thought while walking to open the door wearing a baggy white pants while the towel hang around his neck.

"Sean, what the hell." Max said surprised when he opened the door and saw the silver furred fox standing behind it,

"Can i come in." Sean asked which Max answered by letting him in while closing the door behind him.

"How did you got out, i thought everybody blew up whit the island." Max asked when Sean had sat on the couch of his room, while Max went in the fridge to take some beer,

"Well when the alarms of the self destruction went on, i and other civilians escaped from the island leaving only Mr. Brian and his few loyal guards in there." Sean said looking sad because he had lost his job,

"Well i´m sorry about the whole blew up island thing, mostly because of Nax and his bad luck." Max said muttering the last sentence while taking a sip from his beer.

"No don't be Mr. Brian made some bad things i didn't like, so i think he deserved it." Sean said sighing which made Max to grin,

"Does this mean that you are looking for a job." Max asked making the silver fox look nervous,

"Well i thought that your offer was still open." He asked making the human grin even more,

"I made a promise then, so i am gonna keep it too. But we have to get you some money first that you can find yourself a place to live." Max said making the fox look at him surprised.

"You mean that you are still gonna give me the job after what Mr. Brian tried to do to you." Sean asked which made Max to shrug,

"Well past is a past so lets not ponder about it. Now wait here ill go get you some money to get along and then ill show you around." Max said smirking while he went in his lab where his capsule case was.

The whole day went telling Sean what he work would be in here and showing him the research Max had done about the capsules, his suit and the gravity device. These off course made Sean to yell at him that he would be biggest millionaire if he started to make those capsules more and sell them, which made Max grin and say that Sean could do it because the human himself had already too much reputation, off course this made Sean to pass out . Max had given lots of money for Sean so that he could by a house near by and the rest of the day went sleeping because he was pretty much tired because of the explosion and escape from the island thing.

When the next day came, Sean had came to work whit the capsules and his plans to start selling them. The silver furred fox had told that he will still give over half of the money to Max, which he got from selling the capsules. Which made Max nod, what he was to decline free money, so whiteout further do Sean started to look threw the blueprints of the capsules while Max went to train in his gravity room. The human didn't have to go back to the school till next week and it was Thursday so he had a weekend to train for him self, but his musing where stopped when he heard a phone ring from the outside of the gravity room. So whit a grumble, Max shut of the GR and went to answer the phone.

"Yo!! Max!!" Yelled a male voice on the other side of the line making the human cringe and hold the phone far from his ear,

"What is it Nax and what the hell was the yell for." Max said while carefully returning the phone near his ear.

"I got tickets in the bar called Bluesmoon, remember out little trip and the promise you made." Nexus said,

"Yeah yeah i remember, so when are we going there." Max asked while rubbing his neck because he had really forgotten his promise,

"Well i´ll see you at my place at eight a clock." Nexus said before shutting off the phone,

"What..God dammit i didn't even get to ask where he lives." Max said growling and smashed the phone on the wall making it brake from the pressure he put on it, making Max to sweat drop. After that he went to train some more until the night started to fall, when the time was nearing eight a clock Max had taken a shower and dressed a black pants, black t-shirt, black metal headed leather boots and then he threw his long black leather coat on his shoulders.

"All black just a way i like it. Now where is that doggy bastard." Max said standing on the roof of his house while trying to sense Nexus chakra and when he felt it he smirked and started to leap threw the roofs. He was clad that it was night so that no one can see him while he did these in human tricks. Few minutes later he dropped in front of the house where he could sense Nexus chakra and suddenly the door of the house opened and the brown furred canine stepped out, wearing tight blue jeans, a brown tank top and red leather jacket on it.

"You didn't tell me directions." Max said growling making the canine chuckle nervously and rub his neck.

"Well you found me after all so it´s no big deal." Nexus said while the human just sighed,

"Lets go already i want to get drunk." Max said while Nexus just shrugged and they started to run at the bar called Bluesmoon. They arrived there in few minutes making everyone to look at them when they dropped in front of the door from the nearby roof, the door man just looked at them suspiciously when they gave him the tickets Nexus had. After that they went inside, took a table near the dance floor and started to order drinks which Max paid off course. When the time was nearing at three in the morning Max and Nexus were so drunk that they couldn't stand right anymore which caused the doorman to throw them out, after they cleared their heads they stood up and tossed hands around each others shoulders to take some support that they could walk.

"Thatzz HICK was funzz.." Max said taking a sip from his bottle of whiskey,

"Yeahzz.. HICK it wazzzz... hey.. HICK wherez you tookz that HICK botlezz." Nexus asked taking the bottle from Max hand and took a sip from it,

"From the bazz HICK now wherezz ze goinz." Max asked while the walked forward very sluggishly,

"Atzz Myzz place.. HICK i gotzz somethingzz to showzz you HICK." the brown furred canine said and started to sign while Max joined at his song which no one could even understand. They had been walking about half an hour and it had cleared some of the Max´s head from the alcohol,

"Why.. HICK we are here HICK anyway." Max asked when Nexus stopped in front of his house door and opened it,

WARNING!! K--18
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"Come on.. HICK in i want to HICK show you something." Nexus said and Max just hiccuped and walked inside only to be stopped when Nexus grasped his shoulder and pushed the human against the wall and suddenly Max felt the canines muzzle on his lips and his tongue was probing insides of his mouth. Few second later which felt like hours for Max Nexus let the kiss go and looked at Max whit his green eyes, which made Max to smirk and kiss Nexus back while they walked backward until they fell on the bed where they started to take of their clothes until they both were naked on the bed, Max was lying on his back while Nexus was kneeling on him. Words were no needed because they only wanted to enjoy this moment, so whiteout further a do Nexus started kissed Max on the lips before starting to go down o along his chest until he was licking Max´s balls making him shiver while his erection throbbed painfully. Nexus took a one sniff at the Max´s manhood before taking it in his muzzle only for Max to gasp and grab the sheet of the bed in his fists.

Nexus started to slowly pop his head up and down along side the Max´s cock which made the human moan in pleasure and buck his hips upward those thrusting his member deeper in the canines hot mouth. Few minutes of this nexus could hear Max´s breathing becoming faster so he knew that he was close so he took the dick out of his muzzle, gave a lick at the tip and then plunged his mouth on it making the tip of the dick go deep in his throat, which made Max to yell and buck his hips upward emptying his load in the waiting tummy of the canine.

After that Nexus let the human member drop from his mouth and then he licked his lips while looking at the human whit hungry eyes while his dick had started to throb pre from the tip. Max saw this and grinned while rolling around and standing on all fours, Nexus off course wasn't jumping on him, because he knew that the human wasn't going to enjoy it if he didn't loosen him first. So he crawled closer until the tip of his muzzle was touching the hole in the humans ass, then he started to lick it to make it lubricated enough.

This off course made Max to moan even more while his cock was returning in its full glory, but suddenly he felt something push in and the human could see his canine partner push one of his finger in hiss ass. Making him moan when Nexus started to move the forward and back. The canine continued this until he was using three of his fingers and when he felt that the human´s hole was lose enough he took his fingers out and licked it few time.

Max looked back at the canine when he felt him stop and saw him grinning at him before he positioned him self on top of Max´s back and he could fell something warm and wet probing his anal. Then the canine started to slowly insert his member in the human making the human moan whit him, he started to increase the speed of his thrust slowly so that Max could feel all the pleasure he had to offer. When the canine was feeling his peak coming closer he laid fully on the humans back and bit Max´s shoulder while deepening his thrust. Max suddenly felt that Nexus had took a grip from his member and started to stroke it in the same rhythm that his thrust were making him moan while the canine growled softly, this lasted until Max could feel something growing at the edge of the nexus cock making his thrusts even more pleasurable, until suddenly the canine anthro pushed hard and deep making a loud pop sound which made Max to gasp when the knot entered in his ass.

The feeling was so pleasurable that it made Max to yell and cum right in there which caused to his muscles in his ass to tighten making Nexus to howl and cum inside of the human. After their climax they both fell on the bed panting, while Nexus was tied inside of Max making him murr softly and the human snuggled closer until they both passed out in the dream land.


So what you say HUH??? Was the K-18 section good or not, haven't written those in long time so i might be rusty... XD Well if i get lots of comments ill make more of them LoLz.. So whiteout further word.. TO THE NEXT CHAPTER AND BEOND....

Max Myers and his TFS-109 Chapter..9Maanantai 01.12.2008 19:01

Max Myers and his TFS-109 Chapter..9



Oohh.. Ninth chapter and lots more action coming up.. Lets see how Max and Nax get out from the island..



They were leaping on the tree branches at the mansion, Max had put on his suit and a black trousers on it while strapping his katana on his back.

"So we go in and beat everyone there." The brown furred canine next to the human asked, Nexus was wearing Grey pants but no shirt because it was hot in here.

"Well that pretty much sums it up, but we have to find a plane or boat so that we can escape form this island." Max answered,

"Why did they try to knock us out." Nexus asked when they arrived at the edge of the forest and they hid in the high tree branches to see what was happening on the mansion.

"Probably to cut me up and use my body as an experiment." Max said looking at the guard scurrying around the mansion, they didn't have any sort of fire weapons maybe they were wanted alive. "Here we will keep in contact whit these, your main objective is to find us an escape." Max said handing a small radio transmitter for the canine and he plucked it on his ear.

"And what are you gonna do." Nexus asked which made Max to smirk, the lips of his TFS-109 curling up showing his sharp fangs.

"I´m going to visit my sponsor and get some money for my imago." The human in his suit said making the canine snort next to him,

"Okay lets go." Nexus said leaping down and giving a mule kick on the faces of two furry anthros standing at the entrance of the mansion, which made Max to sigh and jump at the door of the mansion. When he was nearing his target he made a spin kick in mid air and blasted the door off it´s hinges whit his kick.

"Talk about warm welcome." Max said when he landed on his knee at the entrance of the door while Nexus stood next to him. There was probably few dozen guard at the hall way looking at them holding some sort of electrical sticks in their paws.

"Heh they have big toys." Nexus said making Max to face fall on the floor and then leaping at the crowd and starting to hit people threw the walls and doors. Obviously his suit boosted his chakra and strength, because he didn't even put a much of effort on his strikes and people were already flying threw the walls making him sweat drop.

"Fucking piece of shit." Max heard Nexus to growl when one of the electronic stick nicked him and the furry who was smirking was blasted threw the wall by courtesy of Max and his kick.

"You got busted." Max said smirking at Nexus who growled and punched the furry who tried to sneak at him at the face making it fly on the wall whit loud crack.

"Well its easy for you to talk because of that super man suit of yours." The brown furred canine said taking two of the electrical sticks from the floor and then he started to bash some head of those furries around him.

"Well as much as i would like to stay here and chat, we have plane to catch. So call me when you find one." Max said smashing the head of two furries together,

"Yeah yeah just go, ill give this bitches something to eat." Nexus said smashing his stick on the face of one furry making it scream when he was electrocuted. Whit a nod Max took out his katana and started to run at the room where he could feel Mr. Brian´s chakra, while knocking furries away from his road whit the hilt of his katana.

"God dammit these dip shits just keep coming." Max said growling when he leaped on the wall and from there he kicked another furry on the side of its muzzle making it to crash at another two furries who then flied down the stairs while Max landed on the ground and slashed at another furr whit a blunt edge of his sword making it to fall on the floor unconscious. When he finally found the door which led in the room where he met the dragon first time the human noticed that the door was blocked by a large steel plate.

"Well shit." Max said looking around to see another way in the room but suddenly he smacked his face whit a pal of his hand. "Fucking dump shit." He said punching the wall next to the door only for loud clank sound to emit from it and his reward was a surface of the wall to reveal more steel which made Max to growl and take a grip from the handle of his katana and then he took a stance pumping much chakra on his blade making it glow blue.

"Ha." Max yelled making three slash at the wall before returning his katana in its sheath, then he took a step forward and gave a flicks at the middle of the three slashes and suddenly the triangle shaped steel block flied away making a big sized hole on the wall. Max walked in the room only to see that it was empty, but his senses told him that the scaly dragon was here.

"Hmm, wonder." Max said rubbing his chin while walking at the wall where he sensed the dragons chakra and then kicked it only to make the secret door smash off its hinges and smack right at the face of the dragon. The human noticed that he was in panic room, which lots of rich guys bought in their home, there was lots of security monitors, a fridge full of food, a bathroom, bed room and finally a big steel door blocking the way in Mr. Brian´s vault, but when he heard groaning from his left Max turned to look and saw the dragon waking up. Then Max picked the door up and knelled next to the dragon,

"Sorry about that." The human in his wolf suit said grinning at the bloody face of the dragon before dropping the door back on him, "Now i want some decent pay for my suffering in here, if you don't mind." Max asked looking at the vault door then back at the dragon only to notice that he had passed out, which made him sweat drop. "I really have to watch my strength in this suit." Max said grumbling before opening the vault door and emptying anything in his empty capsule.

When Max was done he was just about to call Nexus that had he found a way for them to leave this island, but he was stopped by a loud clank when a metal hit the floor and when he turned to look at the sound he was surprised to find the Grey scaled dragon standing there panting while blood was tripping from his muzzle. But the thing which made Max nervous was the red yes of the dragon and his mad look and Max noticed that there was a broken needle and syringe on the floor, obviously the dragon had pumped something in his self because his chakra was spiking madly.

"Well shit." Max said when the dragon roared and disappeared until to appear again and punch Max threw the wall behind him, "What the hell." Max yelled when he leaped up from the ground to dodge the mad dragon. Only for hand to grab his angle and toss him threw other wall,
"What the hell did he took." Max thought activating his sharingan and charging at the dragon whit a flurry of punches and kick.

"Max do you copy." Said a male voice from the speaker in his suit,

"Yeah Nax wazz up..offf." Max said only for the crazy Mr. Brian in high give him a punch on his stomach, making him smash on the steel door.

"It´s sound´s that you are busy." Nexus said, while Max rolled a side to dodge a punch of the dragon,

"Cut the crap Nax.. Did you find an escape or not." Max asked getting angry that the Mr. Brian wouldn't go down,

"Yeah there´s a speeding boat below the mansion, we could use it to escape threw the tunnel in here, but i cant drive it." Nexus said while Max made a kage bunshin´s and ushered them to attack while he himself took some distance to regroup.

"Yeah yeah ill drive it now see you there." Max said only for Nexus to add his lame joke of the day in here,

"Oh by the way the island will self destruct in fife minutes." Nexus said,

"What.. Nax.. God damned." Max yelled getting pissed off and he started to make hand signs and when he was done he grasped his right hand wrist whit his left hand while crouching low. There was sudden chirping noise filling the hallway and the yellow ball in Max´s hand grew and when he was ready he dispelled the kage bunshin´s and charged at the crazy dragon while his hand dug the floor open. When the dragon noticed Max it was too late, because Max was one step ahead of him.

"Chidori." Max yelled slashing his right arm upwards which severed the left hand of the dragon from his arm pit to his shoulder and lastly knocked it unconscious.

"Ohh shit the self destruction." Max said cursing and started to run where he could feel Nax´s chakra, he had to use very much chakra to boost his speed and others saw him as a black blur rushing past them. When he found his brown furred canine friend he was standing on the white two seated, four engined speeding boat.

"Come on, we got two minutes." Nexus yelled and Max leaped in the boat and started the motors,

"What the hell did you do." Max yelled over the roar of the boats engines while he speed´ed along the tunnel his sharingan activated so that he could see better.

"Nothing, just i just punched this guy and he smashed against some sort of tank and then the alarm started to ring." Nexus said holding the rails of the boat like his life was depending on it which pretty much was true.

"Sigh, if we get out of here alive, i´ll buy you a beer or two. Because i think i need a small vacation." Max said and Nexus just nodded at him, but suddenly there was a loud explosion behind them and Max saw a flames coming at them fast.

"Shit." Max said growling but then he noticed that they were flying threw the air, because they had just exited the cave river which ended on a waterfall.

"Fuuuuucccckkk." Both yelled before their boat smashed on the water,

"Well that was fun." Max said panting on the edge of the boat while Nexus laid on the other side of it,

"You call that fun." The brown furred canine said glaring at Max but suddenly they both burst´ed to laugh. After their little rest Max started to drive the boat until they got in the docks and from there Max stored the boat in one other capsule where he held the stuff from the mansion. After that they called a cab and both went in their separate ways.



Well this was an action filled story wasn't it?? Some one said i need to calm down and think what i write... But i cant if i stop then a new story pops in my head and the old one gets forgotten so i write hard and you just have to suck it... XD Now on the next episode of Max Myers and his TFS-109... Max and Nexus were walking at the canines place after the hard drinking in the bar, both were very drunk so they have to hold each others up, "So wh... HICK.. are we her... HICK again." Max asked while Nexus just smirked, "Yul.. HICK see." The canine said opening the door for his place.

Max Myers and his TFS-109 Chapter..8Sunnuntai 30.11.2008 23:01

Max Myers and his TFS-109 Chapter..8



Sorry that i didn't write any more chappies because i was a driver for my friend on Sunday and i was in little Christmas partying at Saturday, so i didn't got any time. But ill try to keep on one chap at day. XD



When the plane landed on the islands own air field, Nexus was first to rush out (probably to see local chicks) while Max and amused Sean walked out calmly.

"Is he always this excited." Sean asked while they were walking at the mansion while Nexus stopped to flirt whit every female on the road, which made Max to groan.

"Yes when he is around chicks he goes crazy but when alone he is quite smart and fun person." Max said while looking at the sight around him, lots of sand and trees basically island material he thought.

"Its sound like you have knew him long." Sean said,

"Only few weeks, but he has earned the spot of my best friend. Because we some so much common that we know each others problems." Max said while Sean just nodded and they arrived at the mansion only for a cheetah anthro to open the door for them,

"Welcome, come in please." She said smiling while Nexus was grinning and walking at her only to get smacked on the floor by a punch on the head by Max´s fist.

"Naaaxx.. Work now fun later." Max said glaring at the canine but he just grumbled while rubbing his head, it seemed that the place was full of female anthros probably Mr. Brian and Sean were only males. Wonder why Max thought while they walked onward Sean leading them while Nexus walked next to Max.

"Wonder what kind of dude this Brian guy is." Nexus whispered at Max who nodded,

"Yeah, i hope we don't have to fight our way out of here. But i wouldn't mind" Max said whispering the last words before they both looked at each others and then started to giggle pervertedly making Sean to sweat drop.

"We are here." Sean said standing in front of large double doors,

"Well lets go see the boss." Max said grinning before kicking the door open, "Yo." He yelled when he got inside while looking at the Grey scaled anthro dragon sitting behind his desk at the end of the room, he had two white horns coming from his head but he lacked the wings. He was wearing a black suit whit green tie.

"Welcome Mr. Myers my name is Greg Brian." The Grey dragon said after he had stood from his seat and shakes hands whit Max a cross his desk.

"Pleasure.. This is my friend Nax." Max said pointing at the brown canine only to him pout and grumble something about girl´y names. Greg just nodded at Nexus before he sat down on his chair folding his hands below his muzzle.

"Well then, now that you are here why wont we discuss our business at the dinner table later tonight, now Sean here will show you around while leading you to your room where you can stay at." Mr. Brian said smirking while Sean leaded Max and Nexus out. The mansion was huge, there were lots of different room and to Max dismay there was lots of female furries trying to get in his pants but his brown furred canine pal thought that he was in heaven, which off course made Max suspicious because he thought that Mr. Brian had something in his mind. Which wasn't good for the human, but his musing were stopped when they arrived in their room which was big. There was telly, small library, bathroom whit a bath tub and then there was one bed room whit a king sized bed.

"What ONE bed i have to sleep whit him." Max and Nexus shouted while glaring at each others which made Sean chuckle nervously.

"Sorry but we have lots of visitors so there wasn't any room than this left." Sean said and suddenly his phone rang twice and the silver fox looked at it and then apologized that he had to leave. When Sean left Max sighed while Nexus tossed his bag on the bed,

"So what do you think." The canine asked suddenly being serious, while the human crossed his arms over his chest while looking out from the window at the forest near mansion.

"They are up to something, we have to be on alert." Max said while Nexus nodded,

"Yeah i have a bad felling too, but ill take the blanket." Nexus said suddenly which made Max to glare at him and then they started to bigger like little boys until it went into full sparring match. When Sean came in the room few hours later he found the canine and human laying on the floor sweaty and trying to catch their breath while the room looked like it was demolished by terrorists.

"I don't even want to know." Sean said making both guests glare at him weakly, "Now the dinner starts in 20 minutes so i want both of you freshen you self up." Sean said walking out while closing the door behind.

Later that night Sean had bought Max and Nexus at the dinner, it was big room where a long table was in middle of it. Sean told Max and Nexus to sit at the other end of the table while they waited for Mr. Brian´s arrival. Few minutes later the Grey dragon came in and greeted his guest before sitting down and clapping his hands, which made the doors around the room open and different female furries came in carrying different food´s. Which made Max and Nexus to drool, while Max drooled at the food the canine drooled at the females which caused him to get pumped in the head by courtesy of Max and they shared a glare before starting to eat.

"So Mr. Myers how do you like our world." The dragon asked making the human shrug,

"It´s cool, very much like my world." Max said taking a large gulp of the milk bought for him,

"So can you tell me about your world." Mr. Brian´s asked while eating his meal slowly.

"There isn't much to say, our world is like this world but filled whit my kind people and you guys have a relative in our world but they walk on four legs and bark. They aren't much of intelligent so they are classified as pets or wild animals." Max answered, while glaring at Nexus who was trying to flirt whit a waiter.

"Ahh... I see." The Grey dragon said, "So how much you humans are different than us." He asked while Max looked at his smug face.

"Well we don't have so sharp senses than you have but we boost it up by our brain capacity." Max said finishing his meal whit a loud burp making every one gape at him because he had eaten all food on the table.

"Are all humans so big eaters." The dragon asked while rising his scaly eyebrow,

"Nope just me, i move a lot." Max said grinning, few hours later Max and his pal were laying on the different sides of the bed, while trying to catch some sleep.

"So when we start the training you told me about." Nexus asked while Max just grunted while wrapping his blanket tighter around him and turning to look at the wall.

"I´ll tell you tomorrow, there is too much eyes in here." Max said and Nexus noticed that there was few cameras in the room which made him groan,

"It´s like being in the Big Brother house." The canine said.

"yeah it is now don't try anything when I´m in sleep or you find your self sleeping in the forest." Max said making Nexus glare at him,

"Like i would touch a hairless ape." He answered whit a growl before turning to look at the other wall and ten minutes later they were sleeping. Next few days went training and exploring the place, Max had hacked the room cameras to show that they were sleeping in the room while the human and his canine pal went to train in the forest. Nexus was quick to learn to use his chakra so he made a good sparring partner for Max, but off course Max had finished his mobile gravity device and it looked like a wrist watch on his right wrist. He was using it on the fife times of earth gravity making him equal in strength compared to Nexus. He was also surprised that he gets used to the gravity so fast, maybe he had other gift the human thought. He had also learned the water walk and he was now currently using the standing on the tip of the kunai trick. It looked like Max was standing on one finger which was positioned on the tip of the kunai, it helped to rise his chakra levels and endurance. Nexus on the other hand was still trying to get a hang of the tree walking and he had learned the basic skill, bunshin, kawarimi and henge. Max has also thought him the kage bunshin, but he was only able to do one so they left the shadow clones at the mansion while they trained in the forest.

Max and Nexus training in these first three days had upped their skill level very much. Nexus was at genin level on ninjutsu and genjutsu, his chakra control was on low chuunin level and taijutsu was at high chuunin level. Max was at chuunin level on ninjutsu and genjutsu, his chakra control was low level jounin (next level from chuunin) and his taijutsu was at high level jounin, much of this was because of his kage bunshins which he could do 30 and if he made more he will be out of chakra. He had learned two more jutsu, a kirigagure no jutsu which made a thick mist appear to block a sense of sight, but it wasn't problem for him to see because he could now sense chakra which everybody had even if they didn't now it. His second jutsu was a lighting sword called chidori which covered his fist in lighting chakra and made him able to cut threw even thickest steel door but he could only make three chidoris before he was out of chakra.

On the fourth day Max and Nexus were training in middle of the jungle while their clones were at the beach, Max was sparring whit ten of his kage bunshins while the brown furred canine ran up and down on the tree side. Suddenly Max stopped and his clones disappeared while Nexus leaped next to the human.

"Damn they darted my clone." Max said making Nexus to growl,

"I knew there was something else." The canine said and they could hear alarms going off in a distance where the mansion was,

"Well should we give them something in return for stabbing us in the back." Max asked grinning at Nexus who smirked at him while cracking his knuckles.

"Well lets give them hell." Nexus said stretching while Max opened the capsule where his TFS-109 were. They were going to regret trying to make Max in the lab rat of theirs the human thought while changing his clothes to the spandex and then stepping in the suit and activating it.


Well did you like it o_O?? And now i want REWIEWS from anyone who are reading my story.. Now on the next episode of Max Myers and his TFS-109.. "Come on Nax i have 20 down already." Max said while hitting a armored furry whit a spin kick causing it to smash threw the wall, "Well fuck you Max you got that super man suit of yours i stand no chance." Nexus said finishing off his fifth furry whit an upper gut and kick to the neck....

Max Myers and his TFS-109 Chapter..7Sunnuntai 30.11.2008 23:00

Max Myers and his TFS-109 Chapter..7


Ehh.. It´s weekend now and i´m visiting my parents so no its good time to make more chapters for this series.. and now on the story..


Shocked to the core. Was the only thing in Max´s mind, because he had found out that he had the sharingan and fully matured to boost. He thought that it was supposed to be a fiction of some Japanese dude who draw´ed too much anime. Well who he was to argue, if he got the sharingan then he was going to use the gift as much as he could. So whit out further word Max started to train whit it like crazy, right after he had gotten out from the school his rest of the days were spent training and his research was pushed a side for while.

He was surprised when he found out that he could use chakra, it was a mix of spiritual and psychical energy. Or that was what he found out from the Internet. There was a same kind of anime series here that there was in his world so he found lots of thing from there.

The skills he learned where ninjutsu, which were mostly used making these hand signs which then made some sort of move. He was able to breath a big sized fire ball, then there were the three basic skills bunshin which created clones from the user but they were just ghost images to lure enemies to think that they were real when they just were a projection of the user, off course he learned a better version called kage bunshin which crated a solid copy of the user but it gets destroyed when it was hit and Max could only manage make three before he was out of chakra. Then there was kawarimi which made to user able to switch places whit an object at his field of vision lastly there was a henge where he could chance to look someone else but it was also dispelled when he got hit. The second skill was genjutsu which where simply illusion. Third was kenjutsu which was simple sword skills and lastly there was taijutsu which was hand to hand combat.

Off course he learned some chakra control, like walking on the walls but he couldn't do the water walk yet. He was probably in a high genin level (which was the lowest skill level in that series) in ninjutsu, genjutsu and kenjutsu, but his taijutsu level was in high level chuunin (which was next from genin). Max thought that the wolf had been at high level genin, so he had made some progress in this few days.

He had started to do some research when he thought he was ready to return from the intense training regime of his to the regular rhythm of his, but now he had some sparring partners so the training was much more enjoyable.

It had been a week since max had his fight at the club and Rose was angry at him because he wouldn't tell why he was so beaten up when he got at the hotel then, but Max just muttered something about wolf on steroids and continued making his gravity device. A week later from the day the house was ready and they moved back.

The house wasn't much different but there was another big building next to Mike´s house, where Max was going to do his stuff like research and training.

"Wow its big." Max said when they arrived home and saw the new building which made Max to grin and walk at the front door to open it whit his new keys,

"Well ill be in here if you need me." Max said opening the door and walking in and he arrived in hall way. While he walked he saw the room where was tools and few computers, it was big so that all his stuff would fit in there and his research will be done faster because he didn't have room or stuff so he had to do everything by hand. On the opposite the room was empty hall which he decided to use to train but first he had to build the gravity device in there. Then off course at the end of the hallway was his bedroom, there also had o bathroom so that he could take shower.

Max had to move his stuff from Mike´s house to his new one so that he could start do his stuff, when the next day came Max decided to send his shadow clone to the school because he and the two other shadow clones had to build the gravity room. He had found out that the information gained by shadow clone is transferred back to original when they dispel so he decided to send one of them to the school while he trained or did his research.

Two weeks later at night Max was cooking some food at Mike´s house while the fox himself read the newspaper on the kitchen table,

"Oh i all most forgot Max that your sponsor wanted to see you." Mike said suddenly which made the human to turn to look at the grinning fox,

"I have a sponsor and when the hell did i get one." Max asked while resuming to his cooking.

"Well i have to get money fro somewhere and Mr. Brian offered the money." Mike said which made Max to sigh while he laid the dinner on the table,

"What´s the catch." Max asked,

"Well i had to report him about your progress." Mike said which made Max to nod and their conversation stopped because Jean and Rose came to eat. After the dinner Max and Mike were sitting on the couch watching telly while drinking some beer.

"So why does this sponsor want´s to see me." Max asked suddenly making the male fox anthro sigh,

"Well he told me on the phone that he was interested about you, so he said that you could come to see him at his island and bring a friend whit you." Mike said making Max look amused.

"Dude owns his own island, creepy." Max said which made Mike to sweat drop. "So when is the trip." Max asked only to see two plane tickets appear in front of his face held by Mike´s paw.

"You'll go tomorrow ill drive you at the air port." Mike said while Max took the tickets,

"Well i´m gonna go and call it night, see you tomorrow." Max said standing up and walking out from the house only to enter his house. When he got in he took his mobile phone and called his friend.

"Yo!! This is Nexus how can i serve you to day, maybe some massage or.." The voice in the phone said only for Max to interrupt,

"Well i wouldn't mind i have an itch in my crotch Nax." Max said grinning which made the voice in the phone curse,

"God damn Max i thought that it was a big racked girl calling but nooooo you had to ruin my moment." Nexus said and Max could hear him crying on the other side of the phone which made him sweat drop.

"Maybe´ll buy you one, but no back on the business. Would you like to go take a little trip whit me." Max asked sitting on his room couch after he had created three shadow clones and sent one to train while the rest two went to do some research.

"What where is there lots of big racked chicks." Nexus asked sounding exited which made Max to sigh, while he was little bit of pervert Nexus were the super pervert always thinking about females, but his book were quite good.

"Dunno it´s some sort of island, maybe theres a tribe fully of females." Max said and when he heard a thud behind the phone he knew that Nax was in, "See you at air port at 12 a clock." Max said before hanging off the phone and then he went to catch some late night training.

On the next day Max had packed all he needed in the capsules and moved to outside of his house to do some katas, he was wearing black gi whit yellow trims and sash tied around his hip which held a black sneathed katana which had yellow hilt. He was wearing black sandals like those ninja´s used in the anime.

He had been training for hour when he saw Mike looking at him amazed, for only to Max to stop.

"So are we going." Max asked while crossing his arms and giving lazy look at Mike who snapped out from his surprised state,

"Huh, oh jeah lets go." Mike said and they went in the car and the fox started the engine and they drow off. "So where is your parter´n for the trip." Mike asked after few minutes.

"Well he is probably groping some chicks at the air port." Max answered making the fox to sweat drop,

"Oookay." Mike said and the rest of the trip was pretty silent so when they arrived at the air port Nax wasn´t everywhere to be seen, which made Max to groan.

"Well i see you soon have a nice time and please don't go in my house there is a security system installed in there and it might kill." Max said which made Mike to nod while waving good byes at Max and the human went to look at his perverted friend, but he didn't have to walk long when he heard girl´y scream and someone fell in front of him from the sky. Only for Max to notice that it was Nexus beaten in bloody pulp and suddenly a bag fell from the sky and hit his head.

"I told you that girls don't like being peeked on." Max said at the groaning brown furred canine on the ground. He was wearing blue jeans and t-shirt whit a text "I love big racks." text written on the back.

"Oh hi Max." The canine said when he had gotten up and picked up his back bag,

"Let´s go, or we miss up our fly." Max said starting to walk at the air port building while Nexus followed him.

"So why are we going at this island." Nexus asked, which made Max to sigh.

"Well my friend Mike needed a sponsor who wanted to help me to get good imago so this guy Mr. Brian offered some money in enhance of Mike to report about my progress for him and now he had called and said that he wanted to see me and that i could bring a pal whit me." The human said and stopped in front of the count to asked where their port was and after he had gotten the directions they started to walk at there.

"So why did you bring me along." Nexus asked, which made Max to grin.

"Well Nax.." Max said while the brown furred canine said that he couldn't call him Nax because it sounded girl´y but Max just ignored him, "I thought that i wanted someone to spar whit and i can teach you could trick which makes you easier to spy chicks." Max said but Nexus just heard the word "Spying and chiks" which made the canine latch on Max´s leg while yelling that he was the master and he would do anything to learn his wise teachings. Which off course made Max to groan.

When they arrived at the place where the instructions took them they noticed that they were in a big hangar and there was private jet in there while a silver furred fox anthro in black business suit ties´s and all was walking at them.

"Greetings. My name is Sean Summers and I´m Mr. Brian´s assistant, you must be the Max Myers." The fox said shaking hand whit Max,

"Yeah this is my pal Nax." Max said while pointing at the brown canine who was gaping at the jet.

"Well lets move on Mr. Brian is exited to see you." Sean said and they walked in the plane. Sean and Max had some discussions about researches of them, obviously Sean was researcher him self and very smart one. So Max had asked that would he come to work at him if the pay was good and Sean told that he might think about it. After Nexus had stopped his goggling that he was in private jet they started to talk to pass the time in the plane.


These chapters are getting longer and longer, wonder why... Now i want every one REWIEV AND LEAVE COMMENTS so that i know what i have to improve and if you want some bed time action the you have to wait sometime.. Now for further a do to the next chapter yeah.. On next episode of Max Myer and his TFS-109.. "Ooh there´s so much chicks, am i in heaven." Nexus said stars in his eyes while a slight river of blood was falling from his nose making Max to sweat drop.